Certify Gibran's On Children from frozen Phi - #702
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Summary
028a864fb7bb333245159dcf9e2048b9021c3dab04a34f0e299506da9d059455.62c592215e25a2cad5aa311adb05dcb5a1d0d624dc25438d7708be9950d9d88a.Translation
The opening now establishes the speaker, the very young child on the speaker's chest, and the act of holding in separate assertions.
ne musataphaidentifies Gibran's respondent across the collection without importing gender. The request usesshareo, discuss, with the topic as its object and the participants undernua.Life takes
misoas a true reflexive object before the children become the offspring of its longing. The thought passage states both plurality and ownership directly. Reasons precede the conclusions they modify, and bodies and souls remain explicitly plural.The final image uses no reusable weapon vocabulary. Flexible tools, cord, straight and sharp flying things, a marker on a path without end, and the person who sends them build the scene from existing words. Strength is the explicit causer of bending, gladness is its purpose, and a final assertion makes the two acts of love equal.
Isolation
The source-to-Phi view hid the previous glosses, English readings, notes, and limits. After the Phi stream was settled, fresh non-forked source-blind contexts received anonymous Phi packets with canon, grammar, lexicon, and voice references. They derived every exact gloss and English reading from the frozen Phi alone.
Independent source-blind review exposed invalid possessive uses of
miso, an attached request topic, and unclear strength and gladness relations. Each affected English layer was discarded before the Phi was repaired. Fresh unit-scoped contexts then derived and audited every revised unit. The source and derived English were never compared directly.Prose review
The reader-facing notes received separate Humanizer and Phi-voice passes. The review replaced stiff wording such as "the bow that is stable" with "the final, steady bow," rebuilt a crowded ownership sentence, and gave the optative note an explicit action. Validated Phi, exact glosses, derived English, and source quotations remained governed by fidelity.
Records
Checks
python3 scripts/validate_examples.py: 1,305 entries, 0 errors, 0 warningspython3 scripts/validate_sentences.py: 3,313 examples, 0 errorspython3 scripts/validate_sentences.py --paths texts/gibran/on_children.md: 1,433 examples, 0 errors028a864fb7bb333245159dcf9e2048b9021c3dab04a34f0e299506da9d05945562c592215e25a2cad5aa311adb05dcb5a1d0d624dc25438d7708be9950d9d88apython3 scripts/translation_process_status.py --check: 10 certified, 10 pendingpython3 scripts/build_site.pygit diff --cached --checkThe full
--docssentence scan parses 5,532 examples and retains its two recorded migration diagnostics indocuments/evaluation/narrative_test_corpus.md, PHS103 at line 46 and PHS115 at line 212. This pull request does not alter either case.